Comments for Lore Writer http://lorewriter.com Fan and Original Fiction Tue, 19 Jul 2011 05:03:34 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 Comment on Splintered Reality: Part Eleven by Eve Online – Over the hill http://lorewriter.com/2011/07/splintered-reality-part-eleven/#comment-27 Eve Online – Over the hill Tue, 19 Jul 2011 05:03:34 +0000 http://lorewriter.com/?p=156#comment-27 [...] Our good friend R.W. Harper has been kind enough to allow me the privilege of publishing my Eve Online fiction on his Lorewriter.com site.  Not only that, I am in good company as Rod himself and his cousin, Dedra Stevenson (both published authors) also write for the web site.  The latest part to the story, Splintered Reality – part 11 – over the hill can be read here. [...] [...] Our good friend R.W. Harper has been kind enough to allow me the privilege of publishing my Eve Online fiction on his Lorewriter.com site.  Not only that, I am in good company as Rod himself and his cousin, Dedra Stevenson (both published authors) also write for the web site.  The latest part to the story, Splintered Reality – part 11 – over the hill can be read here. [...]

]]> Comment on The Jinni’s Lamp: The Greek Vizier by Dedra http://lorewriter.com/2011/02/the-jinnis-lamp-the-greek-vizier/#comment-26 Dedra Sun, 10 Apr 2011 08:41:18 +0000 http://lorewriter.com/?p=136#comment-26 Umm....nope no way to contact her...sorry. Umm….nope no way to contact her…sorry.

]]> Comment on The Jinni’s Lamp: The Greek Vizier by Wasif http://lorewriter.com/2011/02/the-jinnis-lamp-the-greek-vizier/#comment-25 Wasif Mon, 04 Apr 2011 19:43:27 +0000 http://lorewriter.com/?p=136#comment-25 Is that a true story? Is she still in Dubai? Any way to contact "Bergundy"? Is that a true story? Is she still in Dubai? Any way to contact “Bergundy”?

]]> Comment on The Jinni’s Lamp: The King by The Jinni’s Lamp: A new story series. http://lorewriter.com/2011/01/the-jinnis-lamp-the-king/#comment-24 The Jinni’s Lamp: A new story series. Wed, 19 Jan 2011 18:18:09 +0000 http://lorewriter.com/?p=125#comment-24 [...] this link to read it:  The Jinni’s Lamp:  The King [...] [...] this link to read it:  The Jinni’s Lamp:  The King [...]

]]> Comment on Splintered Reality: Part Seven by What’s the story? http://lorewriter.com/2011/01/splintered-reality-part-seven/#comment-23 What’s the story? Wed, 12 Jan 2011 00:07:00 +0000 http://lorewriter.com/?p=121#comment-23 [...] me I have two long running stories that have spanned many settings, the latest of which is called Splintered Reality and featured over at Lorewriter.com.  I have another title in mind once the entire story is [...] [...] me I have two long running stories that have spanned many settings, the latest of which is called Splintered Reality and featured over at Lorewriter.com.  I have another title in mind once the entire story is [...]

]]> Comment on Tempest Dawn: CH 5 – Mud and Temperment by Julie Whitefeather http://lorewriter.com/2010/11/tempest-dawn-part-five/#comment-22 Julie Whitefeather Fri, 19 Nov 2010 15:26:51 +0000 http://lorewriter.com/?p=95#comment-22 Great Story R.W. Great Story R.W.

]]> Comment on Tempest Dawn: CH 5 – Mud and Temperment by Marcie http://lorewriter.com/2010/11/tempest-dawn-part-five/#comment-21 Marcie Thu, 18 Nov 2010 00:40:07 +0000 http://lorewriter.com/?p=95#comment-21 Rod! More, now please! Rod! More, now please!

]]> Comment on Tempest Dawn: CH 4 – Rain, Rain by Julie Whitefeather http://lorewriter.com/2010/11/tempest-dawn-part-four/#comment-20 Julie Whitefeather Wed, 17 Nov 2010 00:31:18 +0000 http://lorewriter.com/?p=90#comment-20 No!!!! You can't stop there!!! Come on! I was just getting into the story!!!!! Julie No!!!! You can’t stop there!!! Come on! I was just getting into the story!!!!!

Julie

]]> Comment on The Hakima’s Tale: The Swordfight by Frances Kosac http://lorewriter.com/2010/09/the-swordfight/#comment-18 Frances Kosac Thu, 14 Oct 2010 22:07:30 +0000 http://lorewriter.com/?p=64#comment-18 I'm sure all of us, even the best of writers, make mistakes at times, especially if that writer is a very busy person. Plus, you might want to remember that this is a CHILDREN'S story...that will be read by CHILDREN. Yes, it is good to use good grammar for children, but sometimes using the language that they might use themselves, is the best way to get them involved from the start of the story. Plus, that point I just made, might be the very reason the story is written the way it is! I, myself, would relate to a story where the characters speak like I do, rather than like some university professors...but that's just me. ;D Frances I’m sure all of us, even the best of writers, make mistakes at times, especially if that writer is a very busy person. Plus, you might want to remember that this is a CHILDREN’S story…that will be read by CHILDREN. Yes, it is good to use good grammar for children, but sometimes using the language that they might use themselves, is the best way to get them involved from the start of the story. Plus, that point I just made, might be the very reason the story is written the way it is! I, myself, would relate to a story where the characters speak like I do, rather than like some university professors…but that’s just me. ;D
Frances

]]> Comment on The Hakima’s Tale: The Swordfight by Julie Whitefeather http://lorewriter.com/2010/09/the-swordfight/#comment-17 Julie Whitefeather Thu, 14 Oct 2010 19:57:55 +0000 http://lorewriter.com/?p=64#comment-17 It seems to me that the comments left by Kenneth Mint are more disparaging than need be - and to turn around an old adage, fails to see the forest for the trees. What passes for constructive criticism is more a distates for someone's writing style than actual errors. These do not make the short story "very poorly written" but merely something that is not to the liking of that particular reader. There is a world of difference. In the end it's not my website, but it seems like a place to share the joy of writing and not an english class. A private message would have been preferred. Julie It seems to me that the comments left by Kenneth Mint are more disparaging than need be – and to turn around an old adage, fails to see the forest for the trees. What passes for constructive criticism is more a distates for someone’s writing style than actual errors. These do not make the short story “very poorly written” but merely something that is not to the liking of that particular reader. There is a world of difference.

In the end it’s not my website, but it seems like a place to share the joy of writing and not an english class. A private message would have been preferred.

Julie

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